I am a third grade teacher at Alsup Elementary School, an IB World School, in Commerce City, Colorado. I also teach a filmmaking group with students and love to teach poetry!
The main problem is that the pig got a pancake. First the pig wanted to take a bath. Then she wanted to visit her family. Next she wanted to take pictures.
By Alysun
6 comments:
Anonymous
said...
Alyson,
I like your story details but just add a little more but if you did that your story will be great!
this book is really good i can really picture myself in the book because i think that might happen to me one day.How does the story end becuase i want to know what happens to the pig. Hosuman
6 comments:
Alyson,
I like your story details but just add a little more but if you did that your story will be great!
Niko
this book is really good i can really picture myself in the book because i think that might happen to me one day.How does the story end becuase i want to know what happens to the pig. Hosuman
Alysun, I liked how you put the main idea and then you descriebed very good your book. Sincerely,Flor
Niko,
I will write more if it inspiers you from,Alysun
Hosuman, It ended with the pig eating a nother panck with surup. from,Alysun
Flor, Thank you for your coment.from,Alysun
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